A Modest Independence
3
By PalatableDinner
Though this can be read as a standalone, after reading the first book, A Matrimonial Advertisement, I was looking forward to Jenny and Tom’s story. I was disappointed.
There are several typos throughout the book. Circular arguments, recycled descriptions, and unnecessary explanations made for repetitive reading that dragged, resulting in a book that should be at least twenty percent shorter, and at times Jenny and Tom’s relationship journey felt forced. The writing gets progressively less show and more tell throughout the story. At halfway I was disenchanted and at three-quarters I was ready for this book to be over.
At the very beginning it was Jenny who suspected that Giles did not want to be found because he had taken to India and because of the death of his mother, and likely had no idea of Helena’s abuse at the hands of his uncle because news could not reach him. But when they finally reunite, for some reason she thinks he should be grateful Tom helped find him and is all “haven’t you read the paper” as they stand in the middle of the wilderness, and acts completely ignorant when he recites the very reasons she hypothesized at the start.
When Jenny and Tom finally have their big fight it just comes off as very stupid and melodramatic. For a supposed “no-nonsense” 28-year-old, Jenny reads like an obnoxious 21 -year-old, made worse considering the life expectancy back then. She may have been given a retirement sum, but Tom is a lawyer and as far as readers are aware still needs to work, and becoming one in another country where he doesn’t even speak the primary language is no simple task, lest he be financially dependent on her which is another thing. It’s extra cringe when he later says he should have given up everything and stayed with her.
It’s a shame because a lot of research went into this book. There are interesting parallels drawn between Jenny and Tom, and a lot of merit in a story about taking time to discover who you are and exploring concepts of independence and dependence, of power dynamics in relationships and boundaries. But the execution wasn’t there.
This book does romanticize Colonial India, which, to the author’s credit, is acknowledged and apologized for.