Unforgettable Love - A Clean & Wholesome Contemporary Romance

Amazing book

Ok, the first book was incredible! The second one started out incredible, but I think the author got tired of writing it and finally said screw it, and wrote some short random ending THAT MADE NO SENSE!! What happened to Aaron? What about all of Julies friends? Did James come back like he said he would? Did Julie’s dad ever come find her? Like, report James to the police, dude!! I feel like this book was rushed and unfinished with too many flaws and questions that never got answered. The ending made me mad. And I know that they both knew they were supposed to be together and everything, but getting engaged RIGHT AT THAT MOMENT?! They’ve known each other for literally like a week now! I feel like if the author took her time with this book like she was supposed to, the story would have been as amazing, if not better than the first. I’m upset I actually paid money to the second part.

I have never reviewed a book in my life, but I feel very strongly that I need to review this one. The sucky part is that I really enjoyed the authors writing, and was hooked in right away which I appreciate. But the ending of this serious is in despicable. She spent the whole book showing the reader how manipulative, abusive, and frankly psycho the fiancé is (some of the story is even in his point of view). Then after he physically, mentally, and emotionally abused the main character (and attempts to murder a guy by pushing him off a boat, which she witnessed) she just decides nobody should call the cops, yet tells the guy she ends up with that she is scared he won’t stop coming after her!!!?!! And the main character tells her mom that she is leaving and doesn’t want to marry said psycho because “she doesn’t love him and she needs to live her own life”. Ummmm how about you don’t want to marry him because he tried to kill you? Why does every character in this book seem to downplay how dangerous this guy is, including the main character? I just feel like this is a very dangerous message to send to young girls. I really liked the authors writing, and I may read more of her books in hopes that this series was just a fluke, but I honestly can’t believe the author, editers, and publishers didn’t see the kind of message this book conveys. I’m just very sad and disappointed. This book should have ended with mark calling the police, and using his connections at the district attorneys office to help Julie make a case against James. If the author would have conveyed him as just a toxic person that would have been a different story, but she actually conveyed him as a dangerous sociopathic murderer. Hope the authors other books are better.

Good story but quality it’s quite poor. It seems this is an unedited version. Grammatical errors, doesn’t flow well at times especially when changing characters’ perspectives, and some holes in the plot. With some cleaning up, it would be great.

A satisfying read, as well as a delightful story.

The story leaves you hanging. The writing is ok, but the story line is very incomplete. She completely captured the narcissistic personality of the boyfriend and other characters but the story needed to be much longer and give a bit more finality. It's like all this detail and story development only to lead up to nothing. Don't waste your money on it.

Enjoyed reading this and following Julia and Mark

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I found it to be very unrealistic. There were also some mistakes - psoriasis of the liver? I think the author meant cirrhosis. Maybe that's just the nurse in me :) I was entertained by the story but wouldn't read it again.

This book could (should?) easily be longer and have more in-depth character development. Great story line, great plot, but just a little rushed.